#fwf: above the water line

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just above the waterline

my horizon lies

just above the waterline

sea-sky-cloud

grey on gray

drowning

watching lifeline

dip below my sight

no fear, only longing

from the sea,

to the sea

natural cycle

of returning

my horizon lies

just below the waterline

free write friday february 21, 2014: image prompt 15

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8 thoughts on “#fwf: above the water line

  1. Colline February 24, 2014 / 7:37 am

    You say so much with so few words. I enjoyed reading this Phylor.

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    • phylor February 24, 2014 / 12:50 pm

      Thank you, Colline. You should hear how many words I use when I talk, lol.

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  2. Suzanne February 22, 2014 / 6:58 pm

    A powerful sequence of images in your poem and an expression of emotional intensity. I hope you surface soon. :)

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    • phylor February 23, 2014 / 8:23 pm

      Thanks, Suzanne — some times it’s easy to keep my head above the waterline than others!

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  3. Kellie Elmore February 22, 2014 / 4:27 pm

    This was palpable. The water line; a thin line between life and death, hope and surrender. Nice!

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    • phylor February 23, 2014 / 8:24 pm

      Thanks, Kellie! I really was intrigued by your choice of prompts, and am looking forward to seeing where others took the “ocean.”

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  4. Rick Daddario February 22, 2014 / 2:58 pm

    aloha Phylor. i like your thinking in these words “let my fingers fly, eyes closed”. i like where your thoughts drifted in the verse as well. and the subtle shift in grey to gray which leads me to the idea of different kinds of gray. aloha.

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    • phylor February 23, 2014 / 8:21 pm

      Thanks for dropping by! I appreciate the encouraging comments, too.

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