5/5 Challenge, Day 5: The Road to Anywhere

The last of my 5/5 challenge. An exercise in challenges. Worked on this a while, so time to publish!

The place stirred in her a sense of longing. A desire to step out of her world by opening the gate. The trees gestured. The dirt road a short lane to beyond. Shrouded in fog or mist, she had just a transparent glimpse of freedom beyond the gate.

But she felt too minimal to answer the trees call. This was a path for other people. Beautiful people. Smart people. Rich people. Popular people. She was none of these. So, she shuffled on not knowing a celebration party awaited her when she opened the gate and stepped into beyond. {word count: 98}


3 thoughts on “5/5 Challenge, Day 5: The Road to Anywhere

  1. DELL CLOVER July 9, 2015 / 10:21 pm

    Oh WOW! I love the photo and your words really enhanced it.


    • phylor July 10, 2015 / 8:34 am

      I know what lies beyond the gate, but the mistiness of the path afterwards means the final destination could be anywhere. Glad you liked the picture and story.

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