sorrow

if there was

sorrow in the parting

would be like delta

happy to meet the sea

if there was sorrow

in the parting

tears and laughter

warm embraces

if there was

sorrow in the parting

wanted needed

missed remembered

if there was sorrow

in the parting

the parting need

not be

© phylor 2015

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9 thoughts on “sorrow

    • phylor September 19, 2015 / 11:16 pm

      Thank you for your praise!

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    • phylor August 19, 2015 / 8:05 am

      Sometimes sorrow is the strongest emotion. And needed to be written about.
      Thanks for a positive comment on a less than positive post.

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      • Valida Faire August 19, 2015 / 8:08 am

        Oh, I think you know that I’m Big on sorrow–not everyone can write it well, but you and our other regulars do. There’s that thin line between achy and melodramatic, if you get what I mean.

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  1. aseriesofdreams August 18, 2015 / 1:07 pm

    Anaphora comes to play in your wonderful creation–beginning words repetitive until the last “If there was sorrow.” I love that poetic form.

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  2. HumaAq August 18, 2015 / 12:56 pm

    Nicely expressed emotions

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