camera obscura

Collage 28

tank top and undies

cross-legged on the floor

rocking to

rhythm of

hand-crank coffee mill

what remains of my hair

like falling water

obscuring

how much I miss

you

composed for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Writing Prompt # 173 ; Collage # 28

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9 thoughts on “camera obscura

  1. any1mark66 August 26, 2016 / 7:30 am

    Sweet it she’s having a lot of fun missing someone 😉

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      • any1mark66 August 29, 2016 / 10:46 pm

        Sometimes you can only manifest yourself. Other people are extremely interested in complicating things

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  2. wildchild47 August 21, 2016 / 8:38 pm

    as so many have said – short but it makes its statement perfectly …. as for the mysteries? some things are just best left as they are …. even if it just adds to the wondering … and so it’s all good :)

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  3. Michael August 21, 2016 / 3:31 am

    Hmm..lovely response that begs a few questions..like who is missed…..and why? I do like how you have joined the images up….

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    • weebluebirdie August 21, 2016 / 3:35 am

      I’ve just read your’s Michael – you were side by side in my reader! It’s always so interesting how we react so differently to the same prompt.

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  4. kim881 August 21, 2016 / 3:03 am

    Short, sweet and touching!

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